Second filming exercise - improved!

After our second filming exercise, we evaluated it and it did not fit the criteria set as we did not achieve continuity throughout our film, so therefore we decided to re-film it, to do an improved version.
This time we did achieve continuity editing, as it doesn't jump and it flows well.
Again, we made sure that we framed our shots properly, always ensuring that it was correct before we moved on.
We also made sure that we included all the planned shots, as oppose to our first attempt, where after editing we weren't left with all the planned shots that we needed in our film.
We do think that our piece does have atmosphere, as well as pace, after improving it - we achieved this by varying the shots more and including more close-ups.
Again, with more time and practice we probably could improve our film, nonetheless we are very proud of our second attempt at this film and we believe that it is of a good standard!